Don't get me wrong - I'm not trying to be a dick about it, just noticed where a lot of helping hands came from. Hell, half my own licks come straight from Steve Flynn and Bill Bruford, so I'm no trailblazing innovator myself. Influence comes from everywhere in subtle and apparent fashion. Even though I've already listened to Vikernes perform essentially the same track some years ago, that does not diminish what you've written here - merely suggests room for aggressive upward expansion.
You've definitely got some potential, but it's hard to tread fresh water in a stale genre. I listened to a couple other pieces I presume you penned on the same page, and you've got a good grasp of right and wrong in your songwriting.
Keep at it.